Cambridge directed writing asks pupils to develop and evaluate source information for a specified audience and form. Pearson B also includes source-based directed writing. Pearson A’s transactional writing needs close attention to form, audience and purpose; it should not be treated as the same source-based task.
From source points to a letter
In this constructed exercise, a council says longer library hours cost money, while pupils say they lack a quiet evening study space. The task is to write to the council recommending a way forward.
“Longer hours cost money and pupils need space” repeats the two points. A developed response could be: “Please trial one late opening each week. This would give pupils a quiet place to study while allowing the council to measure demand before committing to the cost of longer hours.”
The trial is the writer’s proposal. It responds to both concerns and explains why the recommendation might work. Practice could then focus on a further paragraph considering who would use the session, while keeping proposed ideas distinct from facts given in the source.
Make imaginative writing deliberate
A second constructed starting point is: “I was nervous.” A possible revision is: “I folded the ticket until the crease split. When my name was called, I stayed in my seat.” The physical action and hesitation let the reader infer the feeling.
For a narrative task, the pupil could continue by deciding what makes the character finally move; the story needs something to change. For description, they could instead organise observations of the waiting room, using selected details to sustain its atmosphere. Planning that direction is more useful than adding adjectives without a purpose.
Across these exercises, review paragraph order, sentence control and punctuation as well as ideas. Use the precise task and assessment criteria for the pupil’s course.